I got a lot of suggestions and things to change in this tutorial. There are two areas where I need to make the most changes, i.e. where I have the most problems. The first is that I need to clean up some of the ambient sounds in the audio. This is because some of the ambient sounds are overlaid on top of each other, making the whole audio sound confusing and the presentation not very clear. The second is the change in the background music. This is because there is a mini-game included in this vr game. The shift in sound between the two games needs to be a more pronounced change for the player. This would make the whole soundscape sound richer.
I also got some advice about the blog. I can put together a list of what I need to read each week and post my thoughts.
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